Here's the picture:
Writing Prompt:
Have half the class write a short story that is the 'cause' of the picture, and the other half writes a short story that is an 'effect' of the story.
Lesson/Activity Plan:
- We started with a quick review of cause & effect. I started by standing on a chair and asked the kids to give me some of the possible effects. Next, I asked them to give me some possible causes for me be standing on a chair.
- They then identified the cause & effect in four sentences.
- I then showed them the picture and explained that half of the class would be writing the cause and the other half would be writing the effect. To provide extra support and clarity, I explained that those writing the 'cause' would end with the man falling down the stairs, and that those writing the 'effect' would start with the man falling.
- I then gave them 10 minutes to write, edit & revise. Only a few students required redirection.
- Each "cause" student was paired with an "effect" student, and they read their story as one. They had so much fun seeing their stories become one.
- We had a few extra minutes, so I randomly picked a "cause" and an "effect", and they read their 'story' to the class. I was so impressed with how creative they were and how motivated they were to produce quality writing.
- Use the book Because a Little Bug Went Kachoo by Rosetta Stone to provide extra examples and practice with cause & effect. Or watch it video on YouTube here.
- View OK Go's 'This Too Shall Pass' video with the Rube Goldberg Machine. If you use this version it's the begin through 3:33. It's a great illustration to show kids that the effect can become the cause.
The picture is from the website FHM. Please note that some of the pictures on this website are NOT appropriate for students. Right-click on the picture to save it, then you don't have to worry about it.
Student Sample:
Cause story...
"Wake up, Adam! I've been trying to get you up for half an hour! You're late!" I was still in my pajamas in bed. "What? I'm late?" I sat bolt upright. I heard giggling down the hallway from my little sitter. "That is not funny, Josie!" I yelled. Oh well. I was awake two hours early. What? Three hours?? At least now I can do what I've always wanted to do: Shoot a movie with my twin! "Are you sure we should do this? It's quite an action packed scene," Mark said. We did it anyway though. I took a deep breath and hurled myself down the stairs. "Ahhhhh..." (by Ivy)
"It's not that bad," Michelle said coming back from the hospital. "Yeah it is," Timber said gloomily. "I can't believe I was the cause of this." "It's not your fault," Michelle said. "We just have to make sure he doesn't eat any more peanuts." Timber went to bed feeling worried. I can't believe I fed him peanuts, he thought. I am a bad uncle. The next morning he heard his nephew in the kitchen. "What's this with purple and brown on it?" he said eagerly. "I think I'll eat it!" "Nooo!", Timber roared as he rushed down the stairs. Timber began to fall. (by Sammie)
Effect story...
Jonathon had finally learned his lesson. As he was falling down the stairs, his life flashed before his eyes. He saw his sister Sarah and him at a water park. He saw his dad grilling steak for a family cookout. He also saw his best friend Jim laughing at a comment he had made on the bus. In the split-second before impact, he saw all that mattered to him. He hit the bottom of the stairs and slid to the ground. (by Nate)
"Ahhhhhhhh!" Jake was screaming as he fell. "Thump!" He was laying on the floor now, feeling as if he had broken his arm. "Holy cow!" his mother ran next to him in worry of what had happened. "Let's get you to the hospital," she exclaimed. Jake just sat there with a loud moan when the ambulance arrived. It was a long drive, at least he thought so. (by Kate)
As Junior was falling, he wrote his will in his own mind. He crashed through the floor, and the next thing he knew, he was about to die in his own basement. But when Junior hit the ground, he kept going and hit stairs instead! Junior had discovered a secret basement in his basement. All of a sudden Junior saw a special glow of light. Junior started to walk towards that very light. While walking towards that light with curiosity, he thought of all the possible things that may be the source of that light. Junior discovered that the glow of the light turned out to be... TO BE CONTINUED (by Joshua)
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